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Avalon
2009-06-07 . chapter 5
I am LOVING this story, i think sasuke should pull sakura to him in the next chapter.
Example.
The need to feel Sakura near him overwhelmed his senses as he swiftly pulled her to the confinds of his chest. He breathed in the scent of hair as he buried his face in her hair. He inhaled.
'She...she smells like strawberries...what is she doign to me?'
"Wha-what are you doing?" Sakura asked hesitantly.
The only reponse she received was him tighting his hold on her, yet it was still gentle.
Sasuke opened his mouth to speak and paused.
"I...i don't know" he replied, but he still didn't let go...

(So that would be a good example of what could happen. Hell, you could use that word for word if you wanted to.)
Oh well, hope that helps!
-peace!
Ashley Jo
2009-05-25 . chapter 5
aw
it was just getting good to
please continue
SasuCakesIsMyMainMan
2009-05-24 . chapter 5
Whens the next one this is so GOOD! please make like three more chapters!
QueenThayet12990
2009-05-22 . chapter 1
Whoa. It took me a while to realize this, but Sakura totally has narcolepsy. Look it up on Wikipedia...it might give you some more ideas for the fic. I'm operating under the assumption that you would want ideas, because most authors always are grasping for inspiration, but obviously it's just a suggestion.
brandonlov
2009-05-20 . chapter 5
I liked it. It's a very interesting story. Can't wait to read more.
-my-name-is-V-
2009-05-16 . chapter 5
OMGofijoidsjfao;idrgjaer
i want to know what happens!
you HAVE to update soon.
i REVIEWED. SO YOU UPDATE :]
comprehend?
HAHAS
2009-05-16 . chapter 5
OMG! your fanfiction are very cute!! kya! update soon ! will be looking forward to it! =)
iHyperNeko
2009-05-16 . chapter 5
you should make them kiss! haha tht would be great
awsome story though, it kept me interested
chibi-fyed
2009-05-16 . chapter 5
o sum sasusaku. very cute thnx fo the update n_n
katara Y.O.U.
2009-05-15 . chapter 5
mad story it nice(im jamaican) i like it when sasuke blushes:-)
AllAboutEnvy
2009-05-15 . chapter 5
yay! this is so good! happy day (: love itt!! update soon! byee
xxiluvemoboyzxx
2009-05-15 . chapter 5
wow. i love it. please update soon :]
QueenThayet12990
2009-05-15 . chapter 5
Aww...so sweet. And awkward, the hallmark of all teenage interactions. Keep writing!
Barbed Wire Proxy
2009-05-15 . chapter 5
Ah! I want more. Good story, AU but still good. Keep it comin'.
xemotionallyCONSTIPATEDx
2009-05-15 . chapter 5
ohmygod sakura... XD kya update soon!
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