 Avalon 2009-06-07 . chapter 5 I am LOVING this story, i think sasuke should pull sakura to him in the next chapter.
Example.
The need to feel Sakura near him overwhelmed his senses as he swiftly pulled her to the confinds of his chest. He breathed in the scent of hair as he buried his face in her hair. He inhaled.
'She...she smells like strawberries...what is she doign to me?'
"Wha-what are you doing?" Sakura asked hesitantly.
The only reponse she received was him tighting his hold on her, yet it was still gentle.
Sasuke opened his mouth to speak and paused.
"I...i don't know" he replied, but he still didn't let go...
(So that would be a good example of what could happen. Hell, you could use that word for word if you wanted to.)
Oh well, hope that helps!
-peace! |
 Ashley Jo 2009-05-25 . chapter 5aw
it was just getting good to
please continue |
 SasuCakesIsMyMainMan 2009-05-24 . chapter 5Whens the next one this is so GOOD! please make like three more chapters! |
 QueenThayet12990 2009-05-22 . chapter 1Whoa. It took me a while to realize this, but Sakura totally has narcolepsy. Look it up on Wikipedia...it might give you some more ideas for the fic. I'm operating under the assumption that you would want ideas, because most authors always are grasping for inspiration, but obviously it's just a suggestion. |
 brandonlov 2009-05-20 . chapter 5I liked it. It's a very interesting story. Can't wait to read more. |
 -my-name-is-V- 2009-05-16 . chapter 5OMGofijoidsjfao;idrgjaer
i want to know what happens!
you HAVE to update soon.
i REVIEWED. SO YOU UPDATE :]
comprehend? |
 HAHAS 2009-05-16 . chapter 5 OMG! your fanfiction are very cute!! kya! update soon ! will be looking forward to it! =) |
 iHyperNeko 2009-05-16 . chapter 5you should make them kiss! haha tht would be great
awsome story though, it kept me interested |
 chibi-fyed 2009-05-16 . chapter 5 o sum sasusaku. very cute thnx fo the update n_n |
 katara Y.O.U. 2009-05-15 . chapter 5mad story it nice(im jamaican) i like it when sasuke blushes:-) |
 AllAboutEnvy 2009-05-15 . chapter 5yay! this is so good! happy day (: love itt!! update soon! byee |
 xxiluvemoboyzxx 2009-05-15 . chapter 5wow. i love it. please update soon :] |
 QueenThayet12990 2009-05-15 . chapter 5Aww...so sweet. And awkward, the hallmark of all teenage interactions. Keep writing! |
 Barbed Wire Proxy 2009-05-15 . chapter 5Ah! I want more. Good story, AU but still good. Keep it comin'. |
 xemotionallyCONSTIPATEDx 2009-05-15 . chapter 5ohmygod sakura... XD kya update soon! |