O M G! all i can say is brilliant, too brilliant for words!
i love a story where the good guy turns bad, but work on your grammer a little, k?
but seriously, best fanfic ever!

CLOUD!! wha... go heal... XD
SOra has decided... wonder how things fall through next...

Riku really decided too..
wah..
so interested..
so back in the mood for this story...
XD

Nice. Quite interesting.

I really enjoyed this story, when will the next part of this story be up i am looking forward to reading it.

man i hope you make a sequel. it's a nice story but try checking over your grammar ;)

great..
sora...
haizt...
ganbatte minna!

oh boy.. Riku's dark again...

right..
co riku's the bad one?!
DAMN..
confusion.. and extreme love triad.. XD
-runs to next chap-

THIS IS SO AWEOSME!! UPDATE SOON!

That...was...AWESOME! XD Me likey Heartless Angel form! I can't wait for the sequal! ^^

Concrit:
“Yes, before I can stop him he went inside the dark portal,” - Before I could stop him
It's Sephiroth, not Sephioroth.
'there's no telling what he'll do Sora' - '... to Sora'
“You look scare Sora.” - 'Scary', not 'scare'.
'When another thunder boom the sky,' - 'Another flash of thunder' would suffice here.
'It's not Cloud' - Insert comma between 'not' and 'Cloud'. Not doing so kinda changed the whole meaning of the sentence.
'all three rush towards the scene' - 'rushed' instead of 'rush'

Oh man, it's over? That's sad. In spite of the mistakes, this story was really entertaining from beginning to end. Glad to hear there's a sequel though. Good work and keep it up :)

Awesome last chapter, can't wait for the sequel!
*bites nails in anticipation*

Last chapter eh? You forgot to change the status of the story from "Incomplete" to "Complete".

“You look scare Sora.” - You look 'scared'.

“This isn't about you Sora!” The older teen snapped venomously while glaring at brunette teen. “It's what I want! I want darkness." - Powerful.

'The light was too scare to trust me again and I couldn't go back to the darkness because I was afraid of it.' - too 'scared'.

“Why shouldn't?!" - Why shouldn't 'I'.

OOH! OOH! FINAL BATTLE 8D

“How does that feel Sora! Hurt doesn't it!” - 'hurts'.

The image of the two of them swearing is more amusing than it is powerful :\ It works but... yeah that's just me.

Oh snap? The Heartless Angel was inside Sora? Cool!

The ending was indeed rushed, it pays to take your time with stories, not just rush through them because you want to get them out of the way.

Overall, ignoring grammar/spelling mistakes, this was a highly enjoyable story, Dynasty. This is up there with "Hwoarang Just Got His Report Card" for me, thus making it my equal favourite of your stories :3 The plot was brilliant and the overall story was organised and well executed. You should be proud of this story, but in future, try not to rush chapters, as it is the difference between a pwntastic story and a pwning story (which isn't much, but it gives that little extra oomph, ya know?).

Anyway. Take care.

Overall, pretty good. Good plot, although a few other weird spelling errors, and, yes, a little rushed at the end. But, I'm waiting anxiously for the sequel!

I admit..
I like this chap too.. XD