Dude, you have got a great thing going on here. the story line is well developed, as are the characters. the premise is beautiful, and you are definitely a talented writer. im looking forward to future installments, youre keeping a live a story that shouldnt have ended so quickly. mad props to you bro, and if you ever need any help or anything like that or future projects or anything, itd be bitchin if you hit me up.

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This is one of the first FLCL fanics I've read and by far the best. Keep up the good work.

Pretty awesome, I loved the plot although I wish it didn't skip around to much. I still loved it though.

Great description of feelings, surroundings, and thoughts. So far one of the best FLCL stories i've read. Kept me captivated through the whole chapter.

first fanfic read about FLCL, and I have to say, it's really set the standard. Please, try to update, this story is the shit!

the end lost me @_@

average story, needs some fixing but its alright.