You need a beta reader because your story has a lot of spelling errors, and incomplete/fragmented sentences. I think over all it was good story. I look forward to further chapters.

Loved it!

Hope next chaoter will come soon!

Great chapter and welcome back, please up date soon and happy thanks giving

yayayayayay a new chapter fantastic i loved it cannot wait for another one no rush though the longer the wait the better the surprise. thanks for an update

xx zara

how could anyone lose inspiration for this story its awesome i love it cant wait for you to update it again xx

cool

keep upthe good writing/

mk

Great chapter, please up date soon and welcome back

Wow this is an amazing story and I cant wait to see what happens next, please update soon.

great chapter.. clone twin, oh boy, please up date soon

Great chapter, please up date soon

Great chapter, sounds like atlantis has got heaps of hidden labs... secerts to be discovered, please up date soon

our story gets better and better. I await the next chapter with antisapation.

great chapter, please up date soon, i wounder if they going to use one of the jumpers to fly back to the planet and over to where the other village is?

Great chapter, please, please up date soon