why is it so sad? :'(

Bluegh. He's not a quitter. Even if he was, he'd hang on for his mother. For the other three too, I think, by the end. Also, the dialogue was out of character, although some bits of it were good, and the scenario had possibilities. I wanted more Shiori. Fooey.

This story interested me a lot.
But I was disappointed...I didn't like to read Kurama dying I guess...
Still, very emotional

The story was very interesting and well written but I was left with the sensation of wanting more. Is Kurama really dead? Is it all part of some plot? It raises interesting questions. You're on my author alerts.