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Reviews for: Burden Of Joy
phantom-jedi1
2008-10-22 . chapter 1
Very cute, with a funny twist at the end. Good work!

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WhyMustIWrite
2008-10-12 . chapter 1
This was very sweet. I like the internal struggle, but then the kind acceptance Obi Wan extended. The last line was great!
Darth KenObi-Wan
2008-09-20 . chapter 1
I'd be taking it back, too. Great one-shot! Well done with this!
Banbi-V
2008-09-18 . chapter 1
Hahaha, I loved the ending! =]
pronker
2008-09-17 . chapter 1
Bopped over hear for this fun beginning. Good work, nice and touching, showing little Ani's compassion and TPM Obi-Wan's natural thoughts as the memory of his Master's last words rankles.
Taio Kaiona
2008-09-15 . chapter 1
I like it so far! Please, do carry on!
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