 Arquenniel 2008-09-21 . chapter 1You have such an eloquent voice, but it's not overpowering. Your insights are deft and right on the mark. Reading your work is like getting a breath of fresh air! Lovely! |
 Florencia7 2008-09-21 . chapter 1Great conversation. Wonderful one-shot! |
 TriGemini 2008-09-15 . chapter 1Great one-shot.
As Gibbs says, "He's a hard man to trust, sometimes." But in the end I suppose you have to make the choice in whether to do it or not. Besides, it's obvious at times that in the very end Jack always does the right thing. He maybe a pirate, but he's still a good man.
Really enjoyed reading this one a lot. |
 FriendLey 2008-09-15 . chapter 1Is this a Willabeth? or Sparrabeth? Please let it be a Willabeth. |
 Nytd 2008-09-15 . chapter 1Great idea! Lovely conversation between Elizabeth and Gibbs, and even though she probably still worries about whether or not Jack will forgive her, she must feel better that someone understands that she did what she thought had to be done.
Nicely written!
Well done!
Cheers! |
 Wicked R 2008-09-15 . chapter 1hey there! so nice to see you back with another wonderful addition to your works. I've never seen anybody think of that angle before, but that conversation between the two people who probably love and understand Jack the most needed done. fantastic! |