|Reviews for Four Seasons of You and Me|
| senseria 1/18/13 . chapter 5
I really really really like this :D
| Molly Dooker 11/12/12 . chapter 5
This chapter is by far my favorite.
| AngryShoes 9/5/12 . chapter 5
Very interesting. I love how each one is so different and yet represents the pairing so well.
| horan-hugged 6/13/12 . chapter 1
i absolutely love all of these.
and the parody one omg
THE LORD OF THE RINGS REFERENCE OMG
| Shubhs 10/19/11 . chapter 5
It isn't 'idiot girl'. It should be 'idiotic girl' or just simply 'idiot'. There were a number of grammatical errors. You haven't punctuated properly. Please proof-read again.
Either way, nice read. I love the last one the best. :)
| Trelaney 9/3/11 . chapter 3
And, Green Day reference? CLASSIC!
| SB01 5/4/11 . chapter 5
Ooooh! I am so in love with this world! Its soooo unique. I love how wonderlandesque it is, and i just about squeeed in the end.
I wold love to see a follow up to this maybe about King Tom's possesiveness about his Queen, Queen Hermione going crazy/integrating into "wonderlands/slytherinlands"society as Queen and someone from the "Outer World" stumbling in after searching for her or maybe as a reference of chess, highlighting that, though the King is the most important piece in the chessboard, the Queen is the most powerful.
Just something that would hopefully feed your creative juices, not that it needs much "feeding" when you can dish out stories like this :D
Anyway thanks so much for sharing! It was such a pleasure to read!
| Wisawaffle 8/30/10 . chapter 5
I think you should definitely do a followup on this story.
This was my favorite out of all the ones you've done so far
At first I thought you were twisting "Alic in Wonderland", and "The Labyrinth"
Anyway this was an amazing story and very highly entertaining.
| Ariel in Tempest 7/17/10 . chapter 5
Hermione in wonderland of Slythrin? Hermione and Tom will live happily ever after?fantastic.
| Ariel in Tempest 7/17/10 . chapter 3
well,everyone loves Dumbledore lemon drops! Dumbo's lemon drops is able to keep you from evil things, such as a certain Tom. It's on the top of the"the most sexy sweets" list this year,followed by Lord Voldmort's vicious charming Crystallized ,it's worth to try!
| Halogirl240 7/15/10 . chapter 3
Oh. My. God. I. Have. Died. From. LAUGHTER.
"No, probably not," Dumbledore mused. "I've got it. You three just finished delivering the One Ring to Mordor, and now you're returning to school." He leaned back, satisfied. "It's foolproof! A rock-solid explanation if I ever heard one. Just let the students try to see through that!"
"Hermione, I've been thinking," Ron started, pausing as Harry threw himself backwards in shock, scowling at his redheaded friend.
"Ron, don't scare me like that!" He bit out, still trying to regulate his breathing.
Ron hesitated. "I…had an idea?"
"He's got a point, you know," Harry continued. "You've seduced loads of people. Viktor Krum, in our fourth year—"
Hermione snorted. "I did not seduce him."
"—And of course Ron here—"
"WHAT?" Hermione screeched.
"—And don't forget Professor Snape—no, wait, that was Ginny on Polyjuice, wasn't it?" Harry finished.
"WHAT?" both Hermione and Ron chorused.
She was right, as the books on 'underwater basket weaving' remained exactly where she'd remembered them. She grabbed her favorite book, happily smiling at the thought of once again being able to perform a chevron weave while being completely submerged in water. Most people didn't appreciate the finer things!
Suddenly, her 'sexy Dark Lord' senses began tingling, and she spun around, gasping in shock at the sudden appearance of Tom Riddle.
"You're right." Tom was moving dangerously close to her, and Hermione found there was nowhere to move. "This is not the time for words, but for actions!"
So, Hermione found herself trapped in an intense make-out session with Tom Riddle, which really wasn't such a bad predicament, she reminded herself.
"Marry me," he whispered.
"WHAT?" She screeched, backing away.
Tom gave her a strange look. "I asked, 'are you hungry?'"
| Rena Katsueki 5/6/10 . chapter 5
Alright fair warning now this review is for each chapter so it's going to be long! ;)
'Four Seasons of You and Me'
Great I loved it, I had chills running down my back the whole way through. Even though sonnets aren't really my thing I thought it was wonderful!
I like your version on how Voldy got his body back, not only is it believable but it makes cense in the short time that you explained it. I was really surprised that you were able to get so much feeling into such a short story, but still make it believable and a really good read! I must say for being a one shot it's one of my favorite stories so far! And even though they died at the end it didn't feel bad or anything it just felt right for some reason. I really didn't think that they would die at the end in fact I really didn't know how it was going to end but I don't think I would have it any other way! (By the way love that you put the song at the end!)
'The Cliché Way'
This had me laughing all the way through there were times when I had to cover my mouth so I wouldn't laugh too loud and wake anyone up lol. I loved how everything flowed together and was still a cliché. At the end though the whole "I'm having a baby," she told him. "And you're the father!" thing is that from yu-gi-oh abridged? If not then never mind but it just made it 10 times funnier! I would love for you to do a "Cliché Way Part II" like you said you might do I would defently read it!
‘You Know My Name’
This one took me for a spin after having read something so funny. It was kind of depressing but I really think that you were able to portray what Hermoine would have felt had that actually happened. You were able to keep everyone in character which can be hard without getting too angsty and I think you have achieved that, great job!
‘King and Queen's Gambit’
First off I would like to say thank you for explaining what a King's Gambit and Queen's Gambit is for those of us who don’t play chess a lot *coughmecough* lol, and of course for explaining magical realism. Anyway I love how you took the idea of Alice in Wonderland and made it your own. Personally I love Alice in Wonderland to death, and your short story once I saw what it was based on made me…I don’t want to say squeele I glee but it did lol. At first and at some points in the story I really didn’t know where you were going with it but it all came together in the end and it was a great adventure the whole way through too!
Well that about raps it up I guess…well for now hopefully. Cause I would love it if you continued the short stories and most definably if you continued ‘The Cliché Way’ as that is by far my favourite short story of the bunch!
| outlinedsilver 2/20/10 . chapter 5
Haha, I liked this one.
| freak-4-God 2/14/10 . chapter 3
i LOVE this Dumbledore. So. Hilarious.
| JaceDamian23 8/16/09 . chapter 2
“Well, what did you expect?” She bit back. “That I was going to gift-wrap him for you?”
She flinched at his cruel laughter, readying herself for whatever punishment his vindictive mind was ready to dole out.
“If you value your own life, then yes.