 Shiromori 2008-10-02 . chapter 1This is a good beginning. Do you plan to continue it? The only thing that bothers me is that the Arab's name was Ahmad, not Ibn. Herger thought his name was "ibn" because he didn't understand that Ahmad was reciting his lineage (since "ibn" means "son of" in Arabic).
Since you asked, the warriors who died were Ragnar, Olaf, Skeld, Halga, Roneth, Rethel, Helfdane, and Hygelak, and of course Buliwyf. The ones who survived were Ahmad, Herger, Weath, and Edgtho. |