Excellently done. The emotions are strong, conflicting, and brittle. Everyone's responses are edgy and tense and appropriate for the situation. I like particularly how you use Charley and the rescue plan they stage--cobbled together and desperate but effective, as usual.

I thought that was very well written.

Nicely done.

That was really good! Kind of dark and there was more you could have explored with Sarah's reaction to Cameron - maybe the female thing as well as not being able to speak about it to a human.
Thanks for writing.