I have to say I really enjoy the fic.
This story, the whole Darkhawk arc, are one of the inspirations for my fic Rose Fist Style arc. This and Nikaru-chan's Twenty arc.
Good to see you got back into Writing.

Another quality chapter. I found Tim's answer to Bruce's chapter both sad, and appropriate. Well done.

Wow, never thought I'd see Tim willingly admit his (obvious) similarities to Bruce. It seems to fit here though. Nice little wrap-up of this section, but I'm dying over the cliffhanger! A low-key gang in Gotham without any gimmick at all? Is that even allowed?
Thank you for a most enjoyable story!

Good work!! A little confused by the ending.

Hey, if you still don't like Darkhawk, you might try Grayhawk, but personally I like Darkhawk.

As for the cape, I don't have a very good opinion, but maybe you could have it that Tim didn't include it in the design, but Bruce added it when he sent for it to be made.

Your whole series is awesome and I hope that you continue it and that you update quickly. I can't wait for the next chapter!

I cannot tell you how glad I am to see that you've restarted this series. It really was one of the first pieces of fanfiction I ever got into, and it hasn't disappointed with it's resurrection. Personally I prefer capes on my Bats. Dick can pull of the no cape thing because, well, he's Dick. Otherwise, I think it's a necessary part of the costume. It breaks up the silhouette, which makes it easier on them.

Haha, take that Dinah! Seriously though, great chapter! I wonder what Bab's evil plot is...?
I vote for a cape, cause Tim pulls off dark and mysterious better with a cape. Besides, he can't look too much like Nightwing.
Just a suggestion!
Thank you

i forgot... thats the disagn im using... heh...

you are free to use it if you like it!

ps: whats wrong with coming to Argentina? at least we have very good meat! XD

excelent so far!

regarding the cape... i vote for yes... and you could introduce the BB&TDK memory cloth cape. (you now, glider/wing cape. im working in a fanfic that bruce creates it, and they use them (bruce, tim and cass) for long distance "leaps".

the new codename is pretty good, but i wolud use "phoenix". he would be keping the bird theme, in honor of Robin. while showing that he outgrow it. his unifor would be black whith a phoenix in his chest like nightwing's (honoring dick, again), (yellow in the midle, orange and red on the outside) the inside of the cape having a wing theme, and the outside black, for stealth. his mask black. and in his right arm a small Bat insignia.

you like? :)

If he were going to stay Robin...then definitely a cape...since he isn't no cape.

While for the most part I have no problems with capes as a rule I really don't see this Tim at this time haveing a cape unless there is a reason for it. IE the glider bit from Batman Begins/The Dark Knight. Just my $0.02

Other then that interesting chapter.

Am late reviewing, my apologies, but I'm really glad you've started posting this story again. It's remarkable - usually I avoid first person as much as possible, but it works here.

Capes are very good for dramatic effect, though I've always thought there would be problems with them catching on things.

I haven't spent this much time engrossed in anything like this for some time. I actually cancelled a meeting to finish this. You're an amazing talent.

The only thing I'm having trouble with...is the name Tim took...Darkhawk. It's an active marvel character. It kind of taints the vision a little.

I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.

The second I saw that ie was Dinah at the door I knew this would end badly for Timmy. This should be fun and just to do it. UPDATE SOON


Ok fanboyism over.