Excellent! I loved this story! Sawyer is so sweet! Great!

Absolutely loved this one! You are such an amazing writer and have Sana down! great word choices and descriptions!

That was excellent!

Hey!! (It's Megs/Mojito)

Love the story!! Can't wait to read more too!! ::hug::

Us Sana/Ana fans are solid core eh?

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I liked this, especially the ending! You should write a sequel, where they are actually together (:

I adore you and your writing so much that only you could find the words for it! :D
*BOWS*

Okay, so let's sum it up !
1. The most original idea to change Tftr episode I've ever read !
2. It's Sana, after all... What's not to love !? :D
3. HOT ! Beautifully written, HOT, perfect descriptions and uh... HOT ?
4. Happy ending ! Yay for it !
5. Oh god, what else can I say !? The WHOLE fic was AWESOME ! Loved EVERY, SINGLE word in this !

"“C’mon, Muchacha,” Sawyer whispered, firmly. “Don’t give up on me - on life, yet.”" *sobs*
And now I totally LOVED the whople description, when he was speaking to her, touching her to wake her up ! It was written so aweosome, that I can't even find words for it ! Just ... WOW !
Really, AWESOME job with this ! Respect ! You made me cry with this ! Just beautiful !
So I am not gonna quote anything, because I would have to quote almost two chapters. :P
"“Come back to me, Rambina.”" Yes, come back to him, Ana !
""A--Ana--?!”
SLAP!" HAHA ! :D Good one !
"“W-what were you doin’, pervert?”
Uh-oh.' Now THAT'S Ana Lucia for You ! :P :DD
""Now do the impossible, Lucy, and shut the hell up." His next words were spoken firmly, with no room for her to argue. "Because I'm gonna kiss you.."" Once again: AWW !
The kiss was beautifully written !
"" ‘Cause, I've been awake for the last ten minutes."" :O
Oh, okay ... LOVED THE ENDING !

Yay, I am gonna the first one to review Ur awesomness ! :D I HOPE... Coz it can take a while ...
Watch out, I'm starting !
*clears my throat*
""I feel responsible, Jack. I wanna put it right. Help Muchacha get back.." AW!
""Make up your mind, James. You can't love Kate and Lucia - it's not fair on either."" It's definitely not fair on Ana, but on Kate... Let's just continue with this review, okay? Before I say sth else ... :P
""I won't hurt her.. couldn't. I just gotta try, Jack. I gotta make this right."" Sawyer ! *big hug!*
""... feels guilty for, is dying?" Kate finished off," And of course she had to interrupt... *sighs* She just couldn't help, but thre sth in, could she ? xP
"Muchacha had taken his breath away, stolen it from his lungs " Loved that !