Do you know how Dresden get's himself in these problems?

Err... is Baal an actual figure in mythology or just something you created? I'm kinda curious...

XD... wai- whaa... this only has 7 reviews?

Harry's plans just seem to like going awry.

This was great. I loved how you managed to grasp Harry's entire personality and sarcastic ability. And the fight was pretty much what could be expected with Molly. I look forward to ready the next chapter. Keep it up!

wow! i usually won't read dresden fic cause (well cause most of it is tv-verse) but this is really good! you really captured harry, it sounds like him. please keep it up!

good choice staying in the book series. I did not like the tv series at all.

This is off to a good start, let's have some strong Harry-Murphy action tho!!

Um, what else, yeah, Gard is a Valkyrie btw, just in case that was gonne come up

ciao

Nicely written, I liked the fast pace, but
the last half chapter of chapter two seemed
rushed, apparently Harry hadn't anything
else for that day and still he delays a
missing person case one he might choose to take?
That seems implausible.
That Mara troops up personally to warn dresden
also seems a bit out of character, especially
when, apparently, the whole black court have
decided to oust a member because he hunts
Dresden. I would imagine her sending an lowly
emissary simply because she is that arrogant,
or send it by letter. Instead of Mara warning
him it could also be Kincaid, since we really
don't know anything about him or the archive
could machinate something.
Well it still was a really good beginning and
I hope you will continue this.

Kind regards,
Lars

Nice Dreseden Fic! Though Harry doesn't buy Hot Dogs it's Burger King all the Way...