OMGE you NEED to update this story gesh i love it1

Wow, this was very dramatic! I really enjoyed it as always, especially all the family interaction - it's great to see how Ed would be with his grandson or how Danny and Delinda would be together as parents. I'm looking forward to the next part! :)

This chapter was worth thing evenly wait for the next one.

wow, this is powerfull.

im actually cryng right now.. and thats a comliment. it takes ALOT to make me cry !

love it :)

great story, well written, I can't wait for the next chapter

Uh-oh! That was great, although now you've got me worried... The suspense is really well done though. Hoping for more soon!

The chapter was short and soon with big one. can't wait.

Oh! That was another mean cliffhanger ;) I really enjoyed this chapter again - you write all the action and tension really well and it makes it very exciting to read. I can't wait to find out what happens next! :)

oh my god!,can't wait to know what happened to chapter was worth make us to wait long for next chapter .please update story.

Oh, I'm so glad they're ok! That was another great chapter - I really enjoyed reading it and you built up the suspense in it incredibly well! I'm very excited to see what happens next :)

Again a good writing.

aww love it!

great!,cant wait for next hold the suspense update danny ,delinda nade it.

Oh! No! Please say they're not really dead... But anyway, that was an amazing chapter - your descriptions of Josh's grief at the end are very powerful, especially after the sweet start to the chapter. I can't wait to read more!

no!