I liked it, it was short but interesting...
Oh and on a sidenote: the woman's name is Koharu Utatane not Homura Mitokado :)

AW! Bittersweet angst! You're good at that, ya know?

As short as it was, it's a GOOD start to get rid of your writer's block!

=D

i wuv you layla-chan!

:)

Yay! You wrote another story!

(Finally)

I like the idea because Sasuke seems to be heading down this path.
(Except, multiply these elders' deaths to include the entire village and that is where he wants to be.
Idiot.
As if little kids know anything about the massacre.)

^-^

Hope your writer's block leaves soon!