What a wonderful story! Go Deadpool! Yay snickering! Hmm... That was random.

This was an awesome read. While I can't see the pairing myself, I think it would be cool of they shared a few adventures apart from Messiah War.

possibly one of the best pairings I've ever seen :)

nicely written

It would be pretty awesome if you planed to continue this. I hope its not just a one-shot, cause its really hard to find a good Deadpool fanfic! ><;

I love it. Love both of them, love them together, and love your telling of it. :D

good stuff. i liked it.

This guy is a real comedian. In a recent comic she got the Black Widow to laugh.

Cool story. I like it so far.

Wow, I don't think I've ever read a Deadpool fic like that. That was well written, stuck to Deadpool's character, and included him being sort of sweet with someone. And it was just plain hilarious! Good...I mean Great work!

Well, this potential pairing sure seems unusual. Not in a bad way, mind, but it'll probably take some convincing to really buy into a romantic collection if that's what you're looking for. However, if this is a one-shot, it's an interesting little piece. You covered Wade's character very well in the short amount of time you gave yourself. I would have liked to see a little more from Laura but I can understand how DP would dominate the conversational proceedings.

This really made my day. "I got my eyes on you," that was a brilliant line. Being Deadpool, he probably knew what she was going to do. He's smart like that. I actually thought about doing something with this pairing myself, and I'm surprised that anybody else thought of it.

Aside from that, you've really captured Deadpool's peculiar brand of charm.

Great...Deadpool! Great writing! Do you plan on furthering this team-up?