where is the evil cheese. i read the summary and i decided to read the story because of mr. evil cheese. ya i know im crazy

Wow, this was great write the next chapter please...

love you story,

but i was just saying how it says how he's not 'padfoot's' son, when he never was, instead of prongs x

Story...Cool...Write...Soon!

Dear FeatherQuill, I couldn't find your e-mail so I had to send this in a review. Sorry.

I just opened an archive called Potions and Snitches which is about Snape and Harry mentor fics and father/son fics, that sort of thing. I'm sending the link out to all the authors and readers who I think would be interested.

Here you go:

:)

Jan

Hello wonderful author! :)

This is just to let you know that your story is listed in my website "Potions and Snitches", a fanfiction site dedicated to the mentor relationships between Harry Potter and Severus Snape. Please let me know if you want me to take it down, update your info, talk about chocolate frogs, or have any questions. A link to the website is in my profile.

Thank you for your story! :) It doesn't have a frog rating yet but it's on the list.

Jan

Your fic is unlike any I've read. I usually don't venture into Snape/Lily territory, because it frankly revolts me. I deal with more er... orthodox Lily/James only pairings. But your fic had me oddly fascinated. You know, that saying about a fly being fascinated by a spider? Somewhere along those lines. I will keep an eye on your fic, don't worry about that.

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Sorry about my etherealy weird review up there!

I sound dismal! ;-)

By the way, in the third chapter, you mention

'he was no longer the son of Padfoot.'

You mean, 'he was no longer the son of Prongs.', right?

interesting

i love your fanfic. i was wondering if you are going to write more chapters on it.

Yay! Awesome chapter. I loved how Harry's snake called him 'Harry Potter' and he told her not to call him by that name. Lovely. So where's the rest? Please update! :)

I want harry and Draco to get together after Harry sees him in creamy brown tight leather pants *drool *

Oh gracious. I want a Desription of Harry!

Well, that was certaintly an interesting way of avoiding a swearword... lol

Awesome, awesome fic! I laughed myself to death at these lines:

“Holy—”

“Shittara, please return that crystal ball to its rightful position,” snapped Professor Trelawny but then I revived myself in order to review. :) Those have to be the best lines in the history of fanfic. Update soon!

yay, harry angst! go you! and poor sevvie! It would be too optimistic to hope Harry will try to commit suicide, na? Never mind. am enjoying this greatly. one mistake, Padfoot is Sirius, Prongs is James. You said Harry wasn't Padfoot's son...no, he wasn't. He WAS Prongs' son. other than that, still loving it. write more soon!