Where is next chapter it says to be continued.

Interesting... I think it would be a decent idea to continue this. Although probably provocative for some guys, it's still got potentiol (I can't spell, I know).

Sounds like a good start, but I can't add much more until you add more... It's pretty good.

very good so far. please continue

Kewl, this seems a great start for a great fic, please write more...