She stays because she loves him. Everyone loves Kanda!

You know what I really liked about this piece? That Kanda didn't like it when she blushed. Everyone always makes blushing seem so poetic and whatnot, and it really isn't. It's a weird thing to catch my attention, but it did.

So amazing. :D

That felt so warm. Reading that, I totally got the midday mood with the floating dust particles in the air and the gold tint to their skin. It felt very comfortable and the descriptions were most intriguing, I have to say this phase was quite the imagery: Parts of the wall appear a buttery yellow. So I have to say your color thing did work :DD Awesome chapter again~

Kuro

So rare to find a Bookman clan based story in Bookman's point of view!! XDD Its too common to read these in Rabi's wavered view and having such a clean cut panda look into things is quite nice. You always bring a totally brand new look into such common ideas :DD You are too cool!

Kuro

What a reflection on Cross' death! The imagery was beautiful, especially the last line.~ His death really affected Allen and I can really relate because you never feel much when you see people dying, like on TV or whatever, but when it is someone you know, someone you care about, it really does make an impact, often far worst than you expect. Ugg... I sound so sentimental ;P Anyways this was really good, I love how everything seemed so colorless bu the red of that little girl's dress~ :D

Kuro

?! What is Tyki doing to poor Rinali??!! "we'll be done with this hall" Are they painting the house?? =u=bb You leave me satisfyingly confused, any explanation included? But I just love the way everything flows to nicely, the white landscape just seems so beautiful in such a morbid way that is slowly killing Rinali. And the mentions of Rabi, Kanda, Allen and Komui is just great :) I can't wiat for more~

Kuro

very interesting way of writing and i do certainly enjoyed it even though each chapters are rather short. keep up the work!

I like the way you describe Lenalee's helplessness(:

-claps in excitement- I love the Earl!! :DD And this piece was so cute such a great reflection on his adorably twisted character! XDD And I like Rhode's entrance, it was perfect. The two of them are like such schemers, both so sweet though. I hearted it as always~ These puzzle pieces are really coming together

Kuro

This was such a monotone glimpse into their bleak story. And I loved the feel of it! Everything just felt so right next to each other, and the ideas fit so nicely together :D And I like the phrases in the brackets, it was bittersweet. Even though this piece was a bit sad but it was really strong (now I am just babbling weird things...) and feel so realistic! I look forward to the next one~

Kuro

This one was amazing! Seriously! And that last line can make me swoon with love~ The thought of Allen playing poker with such high stakes is really interesting, and with Tyki of all people! It was total love :D

Kuro

PS: Next chapter was awesome too! Allen and that old man dancing on the table is a very fun scene indeed XD

Aw! I love DGM friendship fics. I feel like this could have been longer, the bond between the four Exorcists emphasized more, but this was really, really cute! =D

-hearts hearts hearts-

I like their conversation a lot at the beginning XD You know it is really hard to write about the Order and their relations without making it a bit if not VERY angst, and to tell you the truth this little series is ubber cute with sugary bits at just the right moments. Meaning: this leaves a smile on my face every time :DD

Kuro

Aw that was cute. I liked it, sweet and just a little sad (well on Allen's part XP)! I like Allen's dwelling and how he finally decided to stay b/c his friends (minus Kanda...sometimes XD) I am sure Allen will pull through! And this piece was quite enjoyable~ Its really hard to find plain friendship/comrade stories, so awesome job!! V

Kuro