This wasn't bad. I enjoyed it, really. My favorite part was with the potato king.

I heart the Cruller.

:D I can totally see Sasha having a copy of Milla's keys.

That was to cute, Raz and Lili are an awesome couple!

~pepper

Maloof takes Mikhail to a dinr and Mikhail has amrican classics for the first time. What are his reactions? American classics being mac n cheese, malted milkshake ect.(Mac n chees being my favorite.)

Could that be a story? You may tweek it toyour liking. Anything with Maloof, Mikhil and mac n cheese, really...

~Molly

hhm very nice funny story

Here is my request(WARNING: very strange), make a story where JT and Chops have a aciident and travel back in time to Omaha Beach, June 6th, 1944.

srry im a WW2 fanatic, ask me any questions and I can probaly answer them.

KTHNXBY

That was so funny! I can just see the boys trying to fix the TV and fail. Is there any chance that you can do another Phoebe/Quentin one?

-pepper-ur-friend

Aw, that was so cute! Again, I love your story. Those two are my favorite couple, I'm trying to take a challenge to write a hundred short one-shots on them. Keep up the great work!

-pepper-ur-friend

Can you do one about Quentin and Phoebe? That would be awesome. I like your story so far.

-pepper-ur-friend

I agree with the other reviewer, I suggest you add some more detail, but you're doing pretty fine, otherwise.

So.. Requests? I have one.

Mikhail and Bobby are having a war. Bobby's weapon? A large hoard of kamikaze confusion rats. Mikhails's? BEAR CALVARY.

Or something with Chloe and Boyd being awesome conspiracy theorists. Or Raz teaching Clem and Crystal how to sing "Ra-Ra-Rasptin". Your choice, or you can do all three. I don't mind, all I know it that I'm not a bad enough dude to write any of these plot bunnies.

Well, that was certainly special.

You have a nice concept here, but you need a lot more detail. Try describing the scene, the characters, what the characters see, feel, smell, hear, think. I think detail could help these stories a lot.

At any rate, in spite of the fact that you really need more detail, I'd like to see more. :3 Maybe some Raz x Lili where Raz tries to give Lili something? Or perhaps something with Maloof and Mikhail, or maybe Clem and Crystal? ...Or more Quentin. Everyone loves Quentin.

~*Digitaldreamer*~