Aw...
I wanted to know what happened.

great stuff. can't wait for an update!

*SMACK* finish the nightwing stories!

Especially the ones mostly about dick Greyson, there aren't many people who write him, and fewer who do it well. so if nothing else, can you please update them?

LOved this LIne,Bruce Wayne was like a stray cat. If you stood perfectly still and didn't say a word, he'd stick around. Made a sudden move, the claws came out" ANd WHAT a Clifthanger!

Ads are not stories. Sorry, ZERO for this chapter. A shame, because I was enjoying reading.

You know, for somebody who claims to be no good at chapter stories, this one seems pretty darn good to me. It's kinda funny. I was thinking the other day how a character like Rachael Dawes from the films in the comics, especially what it would do to Dick and Bruce's relationship if they were to have a kid. Would finally being a true father himself help Bruce reconnect with his first son (because whether it's "official" or not, Dick Grayson IS the son of Bruce Wayne in my book, no if's, and's, or but's) or would seeing Bruce so happy without him hurt Dick beyond reconsiliation?

Very interesting story you go going on here. Update soon, alright?

Evergreen

Update.

COME OUT WITH ANOTHER CHAPTER ALREADY! I love it! I am a true obsesser o Dick Grayson and I say Good Job and also make another damn chapter lol.

*tickles author and hopes for further chapters!*

The woman who bagged Bruce must have some kind of uniqueness to her...

good story so far, and good writing style! Btw, I read chapter 3 but reviewed under chapter 2...

i love it

Oh wow... now we are talking suspence! xD

I can beta you for this one too if you want ^.^

ah the suspense...this is killing me...I want to know more...keep going!

Wow, I hope the author DOES find time to write more, 'cause I really like this as a beginning. There are lots of loose ends at this point, so it's hard to guess where it might end (might have ended?) up, but except for the want of a pass through a spellchecker, this is great. Chapter one hardly touched the teaser, but chapter two indicates that the author could really run with it. I hope it happens.

Spell check dude...it's gotten worse from the first chapter. Also, do your readers a favor and don't post stories you don'tat least intend on finishing. It clogs up the archives and disappoints those who actually like your story.

As for the actual story: it's enjoyable so far. The lack of information helps out as it keeps up the suspense...check your ages. I'm not quite sure what's official, but I believe Bruce would be at least in his forties by the time Grayson assumed the Nightwing persona.