I like the song shuffle idea, and I especially like how they're focused on just a few lines of lyrics. Reading this is like taking a tiny peek into their lives, and you've portrayed their relationship quite nicely. Great job!

nice take on that scene...

aww... betrayal. nice theme. and very nicely written. poor gippal.

kidnapping. that's so gippal.

i specially love that phrase: that it isn’t even dawn is nearing the downright wrong.

blubber. cute. gotta love a romantic gippal.

aw... cute. gods, i've got teary eyes now...

loved them so far.

i was wondering... in the not so near future but maybe two months time... would you mind me doing a tranlastion of these? they're short sweet and... yah. short and sweet. even though i love (live off of) angsty slash, sweetness is cute once in a awhile. so may i?