A good, solid cahpter, developing what will be needed. We learn who the antagonists are. We also learn thy have problems themselves, and the Senshi may inadverdently get help from one of them. So the plot develops. I guess we'll just have to wait for the next update now.

A very cute chapter. The plot thickens, of course. Either Haruka and Michiru are concerned about 'Suna, or 'Suna told them what happened. I wonder which. The Usagi/Mamoru part was excellently played out. The Inner Senshi's interaction was also quite good. I wonder, what will happen next...

A very intriguing opening and story. While Setsuna is right, is does sound like the beginning of a horribly cliche mystery novel, it is still quite interesting. What do these people want? Why would it matter if Setsuna doesn't transform? Why does Setsuna care so much about the change in her planet's status? How could they know whether Setsuna transforms?
I hope we'll see more soon!

I forgot to review this chapter when I read it the first time. Sorry! Anyway, very intriguing and I hope you update again! I've often wondered about this situation. Can't wait to see what you come up with.


Sorry for the delayed review!

I have always wanted to see this story written!

Getting good. This story is intriguing do continue lol.

This is really good and well written. Though, at some point boxes appeare in the story. Anyway, I can't wait to find out what happens. I've not read a story like this before.