FANTASTIC! The way it was set up almost reminded me of a Shakespeare comedy.

When you first mentioned Balthier zipping up Ashe's dress my first thought was "Isn't that a little anachronistic?" Then I realized a society advanced enough for airships should be advanced enough for zippers. So, I withdraw that objection. That's the trouble with steampunk settings. ^_^

Anyway, I really liked it!

That was a great fic! It really made me laugh. Nice work!

That was too good! I loved every bit of it! Excellent work!

Awesome! Can't wait to read more!

Cute cute cute. I liked the end with the poking. ;)

I liked this, it was really entertaining and well written, as your stories always are :)