 Prisonerksc2-303 2009-01-22 . chapter 1Okay. I know. I should've reviewed this earlier. Bad reader. Bad. Sorry. I will now though. I really love the interaction between Zack and Sephiroth. Its just so fitting and comes out so naturally. Oh gosh! I loved it. Talking about love and board games lol. A job well done! Although Zack is right about Sephiroth and his hair, playing Twister and all. Now THATS a sight lol XD. |
 Mystic Katt 2008-11-11 . chapter 1Aww man, that was really nice. I'm just playing Crisis Core for the first time, but from what I've played so far it looks like you've got the characterizations down pretty well. I thought it was cute--and I love the part about Seph and Zack having friendship true love.
Overall, pretty awesome. :D |
 Ilada'Jefiv 2008-11-04 . chapter 1oh, I love your stories! this is another fav! ~Ila :D |
 MillieBee 2008-10-30 . chapter 1How many times can I say that I love your characters? Or, at least, I love the way you present other people's characters.
I struggle SO MUCH writing Sephiroth, trying to get a perfect blend of stoney-faced, even slightly cruel General, and the calm, friendly man he is to his friends. But you seem to have it instinctively. Well done!
The image of Sephiroth playing Twister didn't half make me giggle, too XD. Another great oneshot. Well done! |
 cloudstrifejen 2008-09-27 . chapter 1Lol! Even imagining Sephy playing a board game with Zack is knda cute! Well, we're too familiar with the Sephiroth being a general of Shinra and the god of destruction of Gaia and everything... Makes it... Well, humorous! Oh! Funny fic by the way! ^^ |
 MoonlightTyger 2008-09-21 . chapter 1You know, I had a pretty bad day today...and then I get on here, and I get to read this cute, smile-creating fic =) And I was able to forget everything for a few minutes =) The reading was very fun; I couldn't even tell ya my favorite part cause darn, it was all so good (although picturing Sephiroth playing Twister is especially amusing XD)! Anyways, thanks for another awesome fic =D |
 Chibi Cheesecake 2008-09-16 . chapter 1"preordained in the Lifestream"...priceless. XD Now I'm imagining the Gaia equivalent of the Lifetime channel.
Oh man, everything was so cute (and shippy, squee!) and then all of the sudden the exchange about Zack not betraying anyone. Oh my gosh, to me the foreshadowing to Nibelheim just hit me like a ton of bricks. Maybe that's just the way I read it, especially after tonight's House episode, but it really struck me.
Anyway, all the stuff about the games was really cute, too. ^^ This was so adorable. |
 Kazaam 2008-09-16 . chapter 1 LOLOL! Oh gosh, those opening lines were too funny! They've got to be the best opening lines I've ever read. "Preordained in the stars and sanctioned by the Lifestream." **snickers.** Totally priceless. XD And I love Seph's reaction. LOL.
**snickers @ Seph saying "rainbow and butterflies."** I never thought I'd hear him say that either. XD
Aw, this is such a cute fic! ^^ I love how Zack insists that Seph would be great with a girlfriend, whether or not it would ever happen. And I love the idea of friendship true love! ^^
Darn, I was hoping that Zack had magically been able to convince Seph to play Twister. XD
Oh squee! I loved the last line. ^^ |
 Dantes Valadris 2008-09-16 . chapter 1Aw! Tehee! Can we have more?^^ |
 Wacky Walnut 2008-09-16 . chapter 1Teehee that was so much fun, so in character as well even though it's a conversation that I can't rightly think of every happening
God I bet Sephiroth playing Monopoly would be as leathal as my mum if not more so - it's taken me twenty-two years to beat her in a straight out game without cheating so that's my benchmark
Great fun all the same |
 Ardwynna Morrigu 2008-09-16 . chapter 1So like Seph. Wish I could have seen him playing twister. Somehow I feel Zack would win. Maybe if Seph braided his hair...^_~ |
 persephonevii 2008-09-16 . chapter 1 Great story. Seph and Zack IC. Plot very interesting and amusing too. Only problem: Include sequel of them playing game with more discussions about... stuff. |
 Alexis4 2008-09-16 . chapter 1AW! You're so, so good at that. LOL. Another awesome job. Hey I was wondering do you have place where the the stories in your series are listed in order? I've been try to follow along but I get lost and confused and you right such amazing stories. They're fun and so cute. Can't wait to read what's next! |
 Crystal Rose of Pollux 2008-09-16 . chapter 1LOL at Zack's reason for watching the movie! Yes, I can imagine that Seph would be none too fond of movies like that. I also loved Zack recalling how he got to know Aerith and then fell in love with her.
LOL at Seph's reaction when asked if he believes in soul mates! Oh, goodness... I can't picture Seph with a girlfriend. But yay that he cares abut people! And the friendly banter was wonderful, as usual.
Yay friendship! And yay for them playing Monopoly! I loved the ending lines. |