this stuff is bitter;
ouch.

(loved it.)

I really, really liked this. The whole style-- the ramblyness to it-- was brilliant. It makes it seem more frantic that way, I think. It was pretty and harsh and everything amazing and bittersweet.

I particularly liked the way you started out soft and kind of sweet with each of them, but then managed to twist it into something darker and angsty. Amazing, yes?

♥