great story

Kawai!! Gaara got a baby kiss!

Kawaii! *Glomps Gaara and the baby* Oh my gods I wish I had the ability to draw or paint the mental picture I got of those two... so cute.

Good story

yay! I think the sequal should be called The Sabuku's or something. I think Temari is prego to Shika and Makoto has a keki-Genki or was experimented on or has a demon. Write soon yay! ^o^

sweet...loved this chapter but i just want to say...
NO NOT THE END NO!...cant wait the sequel

AH, it's over Makota can read minds! Sugoi at least that's what I suspect it is!

Sweet chapter. Love the ending and Can't wait for the sequel.:)

yay!! i see you used my suggestion!! that makes me happy XD
Great story!!

aw can't wait for the next chapter! I think that you should write one more chapter as an epilogue!! You know, showing a few years later when Makoto starts the academy or something! that would be so cute! But its your story, i just thought i'd share an opinion!!
keep up the good work!!
update soon!

Wow, yatta Makota gets to stay!! I'm so happy I'm cabbage patching!

Great chappie!!

i want Makoto to STAAY!!

This is so awesome the suspense that you made was amazing... I loved this chapter alot and its so cute how Makoto-kun started saying no when Ai and Michiro came.

Sweet chapter. I'm glad Michiro we being staying with the Sand sibs:)

Go Temari. Kick ** lol. Good chapter. Can't wait for more:)