You have an amazing mind. Taking so many diffrent words and composing them into this story. It works so well from both Ryou's and Bakura's POVs. I'm utterly impressed. This story depressed me, yet I love it to no end!

-LT.

This was really great!

I loved it.

And I'm not one for learning the alphabet.

nice job.

-gasp- Oh my God. You write really well! I could NEVER EVER write something so... emotional and poignant. -bows- You're amazing. Keep the awesome work up.

Mari-chan

Ek! The depressingness! I love it.

I liked it. It's sad and a little disturbing, but it also speaks of a truth long forgotten and buried... and relived in many other stories. You found a way to state plainly what is and I like how it feels. You did a good job. I don't know if it was you intention, however, it speaks to me that way. Very well done.

mfG
Lolchen

This is...different. At least different from everything I read. I liked this a lot.

this is amazing. It's short but it conveys the feeling wonderfully. Um, I don't want to sound picky but wouldn't the letters go first and then the words? Or am I just weird?

Oh wow! :O
It's beautiful, and so original.
Your mind works wonders!
x

That was really deep and well written. I couldn't help but feel slightly depressed after reading this...but I love it! You managed to capture both of them at once with the same words. It's amazing!

Well done. This was a very clever method for earning an insight into either Ryou or Bakuras' mind.
I loved it, despite how sad it made me feel, especially the ending.

WOW! A really interesting and well written fic, it was short but it definately expresed so many things... great work!

aww it's quite sad! i lovd it

especiallt teh Zorc part! i'm hoping that was an abridged refernced because it made me smile XD

I really wish I could give you the immense review singing your praises you so richly deserve but alas I am limited to these few sentences for your brilliance seems to have robbed me of more eloquent praises. I abslolutely adored it and found you word choices to be perfection.

I'm just about crying here.
It's just so sad.
The poor Bakuras.
This was a really great idea... I'm impressed about how you came up with a word for every letter.

LOLOL ROFLMAO OHEMGEE L:KSJDFDPSOJFKLDJSFJLKSDHLFH:SD HAHAHAH
even though this is an angst story
i cant help but find the 'ABCs' funny (x

Genius man ;D keep this up!