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Pablum
2009-09-20 . chapter 9
Wow. That was just so... them. I've seen fanfictions where it touches their past, but never like this before. And I'm glad that someone has finally touched on a love interest, even if it's only for one of the twins.

That was a brave move on your part, and I loved every moment of it, even the bittersweet end. I do wish you wrote more like this, but I love having this at all.

A fan,
Pablum
tomorrow4eva
2009-07-08 . chapter 9
Great story! Congrats on finishing it. I think you did a very good job of dealing with bad circumstances, but still keeping it light and keeping it moving. The story didn't lag or drag, but kept the characters believable even while changing them. I liked that your Sunstreaker kept some nobility despite his learned tendancies to violence. It makes his joining the Autobots make more sense.
ocean's pebble
2009-07-04 . chapter 9
I think that this was ridiculously well written. I love the backstory you've given the twins!
Saberfrost
2009-06-22 . chapter 9
Aw I love the ending!
The obliviousness of Sideswipe made me laugh!
Will there be more?
Meiza
2009-06-22 . chapter 9
Poor Sides...;_;

But it was funny he didn't recognize Sentinal Prime, and I liked how passionate he was about going back for Inertia, even if it was already too late.

I really enjoyed this story. Thank you. ^_^
Dark Angel Dragon
2009-06-21 . chapter 9
Great story. I love your rendition of the twins past and hope to be reading many more stories written by you about the exploits of my two favourite mechs!
shimmershadow30
2009-06-21 . chapter 9
YEAH!! THAT IS AN AWESOME STORY!! IT IS LIKE THE MOST EPIC THING EVER IT IS JUST SO SO GOOD!! YOU DID A TRULY FANTABULASTIC JOB AND IT TOTALLY WILL BE MY FAVE FAVE FOREVER SUPER AMAZING!!
Master of Minds
2009-06-21 . chapter 9
That was a good story! Beautifully written and plotted.
Elita One
2009-06-21 . chapter 9
woot their autobots now
wonderful fic
im gonna re read it again
flamingmarsh
2009-06-21 . chapter 9
poor Inertia.

I feel sorry for the twins that they lost her but i am also glad they joined the Autobots too.

A great ending :)
renegadewriter8
2009-06-16 . chapter 8
NO! NO NO NO NO NO NO NO YOU CAN NOT LEAVE IT THERE!! OMG i HAVE to know what happens! NOW!
Really awesome job! U rock! To tell the truth, at first I was kind of like WTF! When Sunny was being.. nice. It was weird. And u dd an awesome job at showing your dear readers how Sunny became who he is XD
Love ur fic! Continue PLEASE!! (puppy eye)
kouun no ookami
2009-04-18 . chapter 8
excellent title for an excellent story.
Independent.C.
2009-04-09 . chapter 8
Update this!! This story is absolutely awesome, also please don't kill off Inertia. I like the romance you have going between her and Sideswipe.
The Copper Arabian
2009-03-22 . chapter 8
That was a fantastic chapter :) They really are a force to be reckoned with in any of the shows/comics :love:
tomorrow4eva
2009-03-16 . chapter 8
Hehe, nice. I like Jazz's many names. Also, the out-of-fuel. Brilliant.
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