I so love this story! :) And wow! You realy write long chapters! :) It took me a few days to read it peace by peace... nice update... :)
As always Love It... keep it coming! :)

M. I guess this is one of those "pause in the action" chapters... lots of talk, and going back through it, I noticed you edited it to match the current anime storyline...

One plot hole I noticed... we are hearing a lot about Gin and Rangiku being Toshiro's parents... but it went from him saying they weren't in one chapter, to they were in the next. You might want to fix that (That's one scene I'd LOVE to be a fly on the wall for!).

And I am still waiting for reactions from Byakuya and Kenpachi - heck, all of Squad 11 (Sorry guys, no more fights!) - or is Kuchiki still too drunk to make an appearance, LOL?

I love the story I love characters I love the action. I am glad that you finally updated and I am waiting for next updates.

This is a very good piece of work. The relationships between the characters feel natural and Ichigo smashing his fist through the glass was in many ways a very sudden yet powerful reminder of just how much emotion he was feeling. In response to the rethoric itself, it is done well, the conversations are very well put together and are balanced well with the humour, the lack of description at point is a little point of a let down but when you do describe the emotions, the word flow and luscious descriptions of the character's feeling lifts them from the page. That is the highest compliment I can give, very well done.

Best wishes.

Hplo.

great chapter it rocked. keep up the great work. update soon.

Karin sure will be ticked lol and shopping with none other than shopaholic Matsumoto lol please update soon :D please please please please :D as for Shiro's birthdate, are you sure about that one? I remember back in episode 50something, in Renji's flashback, that Momo attended the academy 50 years ago, and then in another one of those flashbacks, Shiro remembered seeing Momo visit him while wearing the red academy uniform, so he has to be at least 50.

YAY! An update! *hugs you*

LOL! Cool :D Please update son! And I would like more development on Ichigo's and Rukia's relationship!!

Uryu and Orihime were so cute it was nearly too much to bear for me...

LOL, Ichigo's powers are badass XD

The end was so cute^^!

LOL

LOL, I've witnessed Chapters becoming longer but shorter? That's new ;D Not that I'm complaining because you're story is just plain awsome^^

LOL, ol' Yama is with them? LOL

I didn't really get Urahara's part o.O

“Hollow these are not. Fake is what they are.” Ryu grumbled darkly, flaming every opponent in his path. (Is Ryu Yoda or what? :D)