Don,

That was a MEAN place to end that chapter! I have stalled with working on my latest story by rereading your fantastic work from the beginning!

You definitely have a talent for story telling that is not surpassed by many ... look forward to the next chapters ... and do you plan on updating LeBlue Wizard soon?

As Always,
Muirnin - who is using her other distraction of NASCAR to procrastinate writing today!

DAMN! update quickly! ;) LOL!

I liked this chapter! I didn't get the impression that Harry was becoming just a tagalong attached to a Hermione/PP/PP relationship. :)

It would be most funny if their new watcher was Filch and Mrs. Norris. :D Of course, they could use McGonagall or Pomfrey as well...but that runs the risk those two wouldn't actually secretly approve of Harry's 'care' and not have the cultural concerns the Indian citizens might have (meaning they would not necessarily prevent certain things from happening).

Outstanding chapter!

while i love the story there doesnt seem to be any real love between the characters just lust like a quick f**k just my opinion but hope u can make us feel the love soon!

If the chaperon is snape, I think I may become physically ill.

While I can see it being Madam Poppy from Hogwarts medical fame, I can also see it being competition for Harry. (GRIN) Worst case would be if the author is using the somewhat raunchy, totally amorous Mother of the twins so popular in other fanfics.

Where the author goes with this one is looking to be fascinating!! Definitely staying on my story alert list.

May the MUSE always be with you!
~!^

Love the story to date. Love the Up yours atitude of the Indian magical ministry to the British. What are the counter moves the British have going? I can't see Shack keeping his position unless he can get Harry back to England and I can see the Dark factions wanting the three girls kissed as criminals, just to hurt Harry.

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

Finaly a new Chapter,

I hope you soon write more.

Beppo Gunnar,
Bonn, Germany

Oh boy, with that ending, can't wait to see who it is they'll be there with, as well as the how the level of frustration may build from that point onward.

Ok, it's official, you're evil. What a cliffie! Just when things were moving along so nicely. That was an interesting discussion with Healer Patil about the marriage negotiations. (Don't tell me you did the same?) I take it the URST will only continue for the foreseeable future? Thanks so much for the update!

Good to have you back with another chapter of this. I rather appreciate the restrained behavior and slow build-up. I have a suspicion that a finally hale Harry is going to open negotiations quite fervently with the heads of the patil and Granger families to make certain he's got matters secured before he heads back to the UK for long enough to straighten things out there - and likely tell off a number of folks who deserve that and more (the more only to be applied if they ignore verbal input, as it should be).

"Healer Patil’s sixth sense was given an unexpected holiday in the hours immediately after the Maharajah’s visit…not once was she forced to raise her voice to keep her nieces’ roaming hands in check, and that afternoon’s medicinal massage and sponge bath were completely chaste and professional. When Padma and Parvati’s Auntie entered Harry’s room after dinner, they (and Hermione) were still wearing cholis underneath their saris, and the Kama Sutra lay unopened and untranslated on the bedside table. “If you are finished with dinner, I wish to examine my patient prior to his travel,” the Healer announced. She waited a bit, expecting Parvati to wisecrack about wanting to perform her own examination…but her niece remained silent. The Healer arched an eyebrow, then added, “Why don’t you ladies run upstairs and pack?” That the teenagers quickly complied with this request and left the room without so much as a kiss on Harry’s cheek only added to the list of uncharacteristic behaviors." - IF I WERE Healer Patil, this uncharacteristic absence of mischief would have had every single of my spidey senses tingling away, nay, ear-splitting spidey sense alarms would have rung!
“You are a very stationary target.” - Yikes, Healer Patil studied military strategy of some sort, I want to deduce from that remark?
"whether it’s with the Potter Patriarch, or with some balding, middle-aged oaf from Mysore.” - Thereby implying that the Potter Patriarch (aka just Harry) is NOT an oaf? Hehehe.
"Harry smiled and wondered just how many fantasies would be fulfilled over the next few days. The answer seemed in doubt a half-hour later, when the four teenagers discovered with whom they’d be sharing Paradise." - Oh dear, THAT sounds ominous...

Another great chapter so update.

Always a fun read.