I was reading through this chapter here, and it suddenly struck me that I recognized this scenario almost word for word from the webcomic Megatokyo. From the restaurant, to the cameras, to the chick accusing the guy of setting it all up so he could laid, to telling her that he didn't deserve that.

Props for that.

Sooo...judging by this chappie, Sora is apparently somewhat like Kanako-chan from Love Hina, in love with her brother? But I'm gonna guess that she's not actually born his sister...otherwise, this would be more of a Forgotten!Naruto story and not a Persona crossover.

I really hope that you decide to continue this fic sometime. Inventing Sora as Naruto's twin sister was a great idea and I can't wait to see what chaos she can come up with at Gekkoukan High. Any chance that she will have the same "Wild Card" ability that Naruto seems to have? She could cover some of the Social Links that the female Protagonist from the new Persona 3 PSP game has. Please update!

Wow awesome story Neon (not that all of your stories aren't .) but i really like how this story is going...it's funny, romantic, and violent, wich is all the makings of a great story in my opinion! lol and i love the twin sis idea haha but maybe i just like it becuase she has such a lovely personality P

This was a great story! I wouldn't mind reading some more of this...it's really good! You're doing a very good job with this , yet one thing is still unclear; what is up with the 'Kiss' or is it one of those twin-semi-indecent ways of showing love to one another relationships

Sweet story, but needs moar updates. Don't just cut stories off before they even get good, man! That just ain't cool.

I am going to enjoy this. please update this one.

I like this.

Woohoo! Incest is the best! .

Derp-a derp. Nice to see you're still breathing. Nice chap BTW. hehehe twincest.

Ugh, a Mary-Sue OC. This story was great until you put your OC in.

Cant wait for next one!

*overlery dramatic gasp*! it lives! o i am so happy. its a little short but i can forgive that because ya know its been a while. o and i must inquire about the level of thier relationship(sora/naruto) i'm cool with incest so u don't need to worry about losing a reader i'm just curious.

ja ne

please update

i meant to ask this a real long time ago but why is Naruto so mean to Yukari?