This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.

the hug was a nice addition

That was good but waaaaaaaaaaaay to short. Write more :)

It was nice.

Well, I must say, coulda' been longer but I still like it! Maybe in future writing you should put some more thoughts and emotions into the characters, even if it is short. I always loved this parting farewell. *sigh* Maybe I will write another pathetic poem about it! I'll be reading so keep writting!

It was really short, but enough to put me in tears. I'm just emotional over this kind of thing. Great job.

Nice story, it would have been better had it been longer. But it was enjoyable none the less.

...wow. You listened to what I said. That's astonishing. 0_0 I know, I'm irritating, but thanks for listening. Capitalize "Kokiri" (as it is a race) and switch the period after "go" to a comma as it is continuing dialog.

Hey you didn't have to change it! oh well, still good