I really love this. It's incredibly creepy, but the imagery is wonderful.

That was a really nice little one shot, it seemed really bright and dark in my head all at the same time. ^^ It almost seemed as if the narrator were the voices in Charlie's head.

Thanks for the review on "Charlie" as well, made me smile that you though it had a good moral.

woah..it's beautiful written ^_^

Wow . . . The phrase short and sweet doesn't really cut it. It was a little more wayward than some of your other work but yet again you manage to bring it all beautifully together with the last paragraph, the last few words. Thank you for another captivating read.