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fluting-through-life
2009-11-18 . chapter 11
Wow. Just. Wow.
This story is totally amazing. Like, seriously. I mean, it's kind of twisted because, if I understand correctly, Starscream's creator did some pretty messed up things to him. But still, it's just... totally incredible. The idea is completely original and the execution is flawless. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon please. Pretty please?
recyclablefoxx
2009-10-03 . chapter 11
Holy crap, this fiction makes me speechless. I can't wait for the next chapter :D
Kaede Akira
2009-09-30 . chapter 11
WOW! This story had me on the edge of my seat the whole time I was reading (which was awhile as it's rather lengthy). Your characterizations are wonderful and there are definite twists going on here. Like why Starscream and Skywarp are so close that was a what-NO-WAY! moment for me. Anyway this is fantastic and I was wondering if we could expect an update anytime soon?
tiedwithribbons
2009-08-30 . chapter 6
HURRY UP AND UPDATE ALREADY! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
Fliara48
2009-08-11 . chapter 11
*sitting on the edge of my seat* OO *wide eyed* This is amazing! I love the way you write. And the story is different from the usual starscream fic, but it is absolutely BRILLIANT with so many possibilities! I can't wait to see where you take it. =D *eager for more*
tiedwithribbons
2009-08-11 . chapter 10
How's about an update?
tiedwithribbons
2009-08-10 . chapter 1
Excuse me. Do you do requests? Because I have a story idea I'd like to give you.
John Smith
2009-08-02 . chapter 11
Wow! I really love this story so far! Honestly I wasn't keen on the basic plot at first (although it definitely attracted the fangirl in me, hence clicking it), but your writing is amazing. You portray the characters extremely well, and I absolutely adore your original characters/Dire/everything!! I'm surprised that you only have 44 reviews so far, this is an excellently written story.

I was a little bothered by your depiction of the trine's relationship, especially with the trust among the three of them--I generally see Starscream as being distant, even from his two wingmates. How-ever! You've totally removed all my apprehension, 100%. Okay and I cannot stress how stubborn a person I am. It's ridiculous. So the fact that you've been able to spin me 180 degrees is an incredible feat itself. Mazel tov! I love the history between Starscream and Skywarp so far, it's beautiful and touching and--augh! Starscream is such a woobie! I hate it! I hate it because I love it so much! I LOVE YOU. Thanks for giving us this story! ^_^
Shira
2009-07-16 . chapter 11
Absolutely brilliant story- I'm on the edge of my seat to find out more! I really enjoy your writing style- its refreshing to be able to get into the charater's heads for some much needed personality developement.
MaryR1316
2009-06-28 . chapter 1
Dude I was freaking out when I couldn’t find your fic to reread!! Now it should be even better with new sense and stuff! (^_^) and yes I still quote you on deviantart.
Sixshotto
2009-06-25 . chapter 11
Wow, I apparently haven't reviewed yet! The newly uploaded version, that is.
I'm still loving this fic, 100 percent.

There's going to be a totally new chapter 12? Ooh, I can't wait to read it!
tiedwithribbons
2009-05-26 . chapter 11
Um...where's the romance?
Hexanna
2009-05-21 . chapter 11
MORE MROEMROE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MOREMOR MROE MORE MROERMEROEMROEREOMOEMR

MERE MERE MRER MERE MERM EMEMREMREMREMREM

MORE!1
Shadir
2009-05-18 . chapter 11
This you this putting very, but very dangerous.
13IsTaLkThEaKaTsUkI13
2009-05-18 . chapter 11
Uh-oh. Soundwave, what have you done?
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