Why does Ace suck ** in this story?

Maybe you should chop off your fingers and shove them up your loose **, since they helped you to type up an abomination like this.

You suck.
Go die.

Ace is really funny. He´s carefree like luffy, but he´s smarter. Please continue.

Well, this story piqued my interest. I'm interested, but I did notice that you made it clear that she was pretty. Please don't make her turn into a Mary-Sue, aka, someone who is gorgeous, strong, everybody loves her, in other words, perfect. Most people don't like Mary-Sue's.
But if she isn't a Mary-Sue, then I have no issues with this fic, so please do continue,

SK

Momo-chan!! Ace is really funny. He´s my favorite one piece character. Please continue writing.

Good luck Sakura-chan.