So after having your story in my favorite for...forever, I decided to read it today. It is amazing! Between anger, tears and laughter, I can't wait for another chapter!

That was so well done - very powerful words. I especially loved the part about her feeling like she'll never be a woman. Jakes POV was too good. Great, great chapter.

I really can´t blame them. It was his own damn fault and he deserved everything he got. But most of all, I loved Rosalie´s little offhand comment. Just awesome.

Yes, I definitely like the doctor. It´s logical he would see the truth about the Cullens. He´s no fool. Really awesome story.

This story is very fascinating. An unusual plot, but I like it. I absolutely love the wolf/dog beast and Dr. Reyerson. Very acerbic humour, too. I appreciate that.

I ADORE this story!! read through the whole thing in one night! I cannot wait for more!!

this is a beautiful story. i just how i could really feel b's anger at the beginning and even throught to the later chapters. all i have to say is PLEASE let them be together in the end. your edward and bella just belong together. we've already seen what they would be like apart...

Wow, I'm so pleased I found your amazing story.

Your analysis of their traits and decisions gives a depth to these characters that I have never seen.

Truly clever writing.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Chapter was long awaited and a nice edition to the story. Write more as soon!

I've enjoyed the peeling of the onion, layer after layer, learning about Edward & Bella separately & together.
Well defined personalities & relationshis are the hallmark of this story.
Every character has been a revelation in their memory of the past, & their hopes/desires for the future.
Thank you.
jansails/jan2

YOU ARE BRILLIANT.

jansails/jan2

Wow, this killed me. So poignant - so bittersweet. What a wonderful yet totally HEARTFAIL ending to the chapter - that Bella offers only her thoughts to an Edward who has shattered everything else. I'm so glad there are other chapters to move on to. This is too sad of a moment to dwell upon! Again, I'm really enjoying this fic and looking forward to the rest!

wonderful reading this today, even though i didn't quite get a few tasks accomplished that were on my agenda. :)

really fun to have a strong, capable Bella!

any chance of any more chapters coming?

thank you!

I really hope she's made the decision to be with him forever. To be turned... I love your strong Bella. And of course I adore Edward. Self loathing and all. ;)

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Heartbreaking. :(