Wicked! I can't wait til the next chapter. It's so cute that Little Trunks is jealous. =P Adorable.

This is a true oasis in the middle of the desert of horrible, horrible, HORRIBLE fanfiction that is the Dragon Ball Z category.

Thank you for writing it, this is one of the very few fanfics in this category that are worth reading.

awesome! update please

hahaha Trunks is jelaous (spell) awesome!! cant wait for the next chapter ^^

Poor Trunks (both of them). Chibi Trunks is so upset and lost and M.Trunks lost his family. Awesome job! Please update soon!
-D101

Good chapter. I liked that Chibi Trunks was so reticient about M. Trunks. Only children always think they want a brother/sister but when it happens, they're not so happy about it :)

FINALLY!!..im so happy u updated. i really love your story so plzz keep writing..

I really like the story. Oh, and just to fill you in, it's rather unlawful to compare movie events to the series since they don't "technically" fall into the same timeline.

Hm, you said you needed an idea in order to make this story flow out...uhm. I'm not one who is great with ideas, but I would have been highly interested to seen M. Trunks interact with Gohan. You could just continue on with events that involve M. Trunks interacting with a new world to him in his mind and in the meanwhile Chibi Trunks trying to cope with the presence of a stranger. Kind of like a brother-bonding story.

Obviously, since it's DBZ there needs to be some sort of action involved. There you would have to create a new villain, please no recycled villains. It makes the creativity even more brilliant. In fact, I'm somewhat thinking of a quest of sorts. Either for M. Trunks or Chibi Trunks. I'm not sure. Either way, M. Trunks needs to come to a resolving term about his position in life and Chibi Trunks needs to come to terms with his older self. The story might have a deeper feeling if it occurred over a few years rather than in short amount of time. At the age of nine, Chibi Trunks would be a bit too self-centered. I'm thinking 10 or 11 is where he'd start to mature a little more. But that's about as much hinting as I possibly can give.

Thank s for the story. I really enjoyed it. I always wished Chibi Trunks and M. Trunks would have met, but that obviously never happened.

-Pchu

i thought this was really good :)
clever idea

Omg! Mirai Trunks! He needs a hug, but I'm sure Bulma will give hm one. Chibi Trunks has always been the perceptive one...But aha! Vegeta has brown hair! lol. You should change the black hair and eyes to dark hair and eyes since black in the hair spectrum is more of a super dark brown anyways.

I hope you update soon because you left this on a sad cliffy. The vibes I'm getting are Bulma smothering Mirai Trunks and Chibi Trunks will start asking tons of questions. -waits for next chapter patiently- =D

this is like the Mooby's of fanfic, I'm eating it!

A very well written chapter. Little Trunks is perfectly in character and so is the future trunks. I suppose you too have been bothered by all of the other fics. that portray the two as pretty much the same person or not having one bothered by how the other acts. any way i can't wait for the next chapter.

Lovely fanfic! :3 You are doing a great job! Ceep the chapters comming! :D 10/10

I really liked the way you had Trunks and M. Trunks meet. I liked M. Trunks' reflections of how his younger self is different that himself. Good job on characterization and looking forward to the next chapter!

Excellent chapter! I loved how Trunks met Trunks, haha! It was so typical; they pulled his hair : ) I loved it. Do update soon!