I have always thought the Fall girl ended abruptly. I really like the way you have portrayed the relationship between the two characters. Very good.

Wonderful!

I loved seeing this new offering from you! The abrupt end to this episode left the viewer wanting more. We needed to see some kind of closure between the three men in the wake of events.

Bodie's sense of betrayal was heartbreaking to witness; no less painful was Doyle's unwilling part in Bodie's treatment! Cowley ought to have seen Willis' treachery a mile off, IMHO!

Great work as always, Bear!

Evendim

Wow, that was really good! Fall Girl is one of my favourite episodes. I would have put something for you to improve on, but I can't think of anything. That's how good it is!