Your so good (: I can't wait to read more...

Yay. Good story, good writing. :D

This is really good, I love it! It feels like this must be exactly what happened.

Wonderful. Cant wait for more of this

KW

wow! thats a great story! i really really enjoyed it
i hope you continue it

Amazing...

Wow! I'm surprised you don't have more review! I'd love to see more chapters from BD and your perspective. I always wondered what was going through Edward's head when Jacob described him as the "burning man". It'd be really great if you could continue!

Wow! You are an amazing writer!

I completely agree taht there was a blank spot in the story that needed to be filled- and you were able to do so in a way that completely fell in step with the story. Bravo!!

I LOVED YOUR STORY! It was very good. It is exactly how I thought it happened as i read the the book. Write more please!

wow that was perfect!

It's about time! Wow poor edward and bella. U need to update soon. More chapters! Great job though.

GREAT STORY YOU SHOULD HAVE TOTALLY CONTINUED!

Great work,beautifully written!! You really should continue...

great story