Thanks for finishing this one! I read chapters 1-9 a while ago and was delighted to see that you updated.

I really like your writing style. You're characterisation is spot on and you have very clever plot development in your stories. This one was great. And I am a sucker for a happy ending! Thanks again!

Aw nice ending! :D Shame on you for keeping us waiting so long, but really nice. Glad you didnt kill Bo and nice Schneider Joke at the end lol. Hope to hear more from you soon! Lord knows I need something good to read around here.

Great Story, Great writing, Superb author. Well Done.

Please update soon, ive been waiting for weeks now! Its such a fab story!

Come on! Trust the Cherokee! They know a lot more about healing then we do! Some illnesses get worse before they get better.

Ok...my prediction is that whatever the herokee gave him will make him throw up the bad meat he ate and make him better...but I guess we'll see...greatr as always!

m...I hope he help's Bo...would really prove a point that sometimes Docs just over complacate everything in hospitals and wind up missing the simplest of things that could have saved the life in the first place. Here's hoping this guy saves Bo :(

Update soon! Great chapter :)

I sure hope that ain't a angry bear out for the kill ", anyway
could you try to update sometime tonight can't wait to read more.

Ok, Jackie's having her incredible blonde moment of the year... somehow I completely missed the entire existence of this chapter...yeah... I THOUGHT there was an awfully big gap between those chapters... :)

Now that I've revealed how incredibly NOT with it I am lately, I guess I'll review this one too, now that I've READ it! Except now I know what happens next... kind of... but I'll say it anyways: oh no, Bo! Ack!

I still can't believe I missed this. Sheesh.

Jackie

This si bad, of course, it might not be a bear. If it is, it's a black bear and you can scare them away, but they have been known to hunt children and with Luke bieng hurt... I don't know, just update soon!

DANG! Luke just ain't having a good day is he? Geez, I'm afraid to ask what else you have in mind for him, so I'll settle for hoping it's something large, furry, and FRIENDLY coming! Now Luke, why didn't you listen to **? Gah. Anyways, I love the update!

Jackie

Uh oh! Things just keep getting worse for both boys, I knew this would happen! Old Duke Luck coming into play :S Update soon! Poor Luke! Poor Bo!

poor Bo. His fever must be really severe to crash so quickly. Normally it takes a long time to heat up from icy water.

Bo is so sick - how are they going to get him to the doctor or hospital if every time they take him out of the water his tep soars again? And if they don't get him to hospital he can't get the treatment he needs!

For everyone's sake, update soon - please.

EK! Poor Bo! Here's hoping they can help him...seems most of the time Jesse knows better than the Doc does anyway lol. Update soon!

I really hope he just decided to take a nap...but somehow I dont think so...