I really loved their baking session with Teyla (kind of sad it got interrupted actually, I'd have loved to see how it went - would they burn something? And would little Sammy have tried to modify the oven to make it bake faster? ;) )

I'm a little disappointed they all wanted to be turned back tp full size, it would have been fun it one of them had to be convinced not to stay a child.
I do love the scene where they hug Mckay - but I'd have liked a follow up scene on that when they were adults again.
(or perhaps just Sam and Rodney talking about her childhood experiences, as a mirror to McKay's sharing mood in Redemption.) perhaps you could do an Encore?

Nice fic, and a hilarious ending

[“Colonel Sheppard and Major Lorne please report to my office to explain their…….latest art project.”]
If they are directly addressed over the intercom by name, should it not be 'your ..art project'?

An interesting fic that works on many levels.

[“Ha, even the little ladies still have a thing for them,” remarked McKay smugly, only to cry out in pain as Ronon elbowed him.]

LOL Typical Rodney, jealous and poking fun at John whenever girls are involved. (Though I don't know why Ronon always keeps poking him for that - Something I've seen in other fics as well - as I think John can take care of himself when it comes to Rodney. or even see the humor in it. Not saying it doesn't happen on the show, but I find Ronons poking sometimes interruptive of the old Rodney-Sheppard banter. [sorry for putting my pet peeve in your review, but I needed to ask someone]

Also I'm kind of surprised he did not try to lure Carter to him with his Lego's (or the Atlantis equivalent: Replicator blocks. ;-) )


So, Teyla's going to take over command from Carter? I'm glad her leadership capabilities are still appreciated in fanfic world, now the shows writers seem to have forgotten them.

Dear Lemons and wraith, oh my

Nice little funny short. Sam’s thoughts and emotions were full of depth (the surprise and the humor she felt toward the strangeness of the situation). Poor Evan Lorne. Hope he doesn’t get into too much trouble; practically since its technically Sam’s fault.

Well thanks for my request. It was fun. God bless.


Data Seeker

Dear Lemons and wraith oh my


The following scenes are funny, and emotional and creatively full of depth.

Larrin (in her adult mind) is annoyed, tired of her small body, and the random memory loss, and she puts on a tough face; While Sam and Jennifer (Who also have their adult minds) are trying to make the best of it. The interactions and conversations between them and Teylia were great. Nice little bedtime snack they had.

The scene where they are turned normal was cute, funny and believable.

The following scenes are dynamic. I like the portrayal of the woman getting over their tough week.

Sam was good.

The talk between Jennifer and Ronon was humorous and sweet.

And the scene with John and Larrin was very long, well written and in depth; I really liked Larrin’s tangled emotions (though she hid it pretty well) and memory surfaced, and she…was less rude with John, acknowledging that he was helping out.

The wholesome standards are high (You must be tired of me saying that, don’t worry I won’t say that in the next review).

Hope this review brightens your day. God bless.


Data Seeker

Dear Lemons and wraith oh my

The following scenes are very cute, funny and intense, with great interactions, describing their characters thoughts, emotions and their dialogs and interactions.

The follow scenes are entertaining, and Operation Meredith was very, very funny.

The next scenes were amusing too; and that was an interesting plot twist when the girls (in their child-state) learn that something is up and like curious bashful girls, ask about themselves and learn the truth (the interaction among John and them was great).

The wholesome standards are high (but you already knew that).

Hope this review brightens your day. God bless.


Data Seeker

Dear Lemons and wraith oh my

I like what happened.

Sam and Larrin are acting like curious fun loving kids, and the men (namely John and Lorne) are very reluctant to babysit. And the women (Teylia and Dr. Keller) are not reluctant as the men, but the whole thing is still strange. They were very well-written and full of emotion and depth.

It was amusing with Sam wakening and wants to know what’s going on and now must endure her condition.

The ending was interesting. Jennifer is a sweet, hesistate (but has some bravery), and her being a child too is cute.

The wholesome standards are high. And I didn’t mind much a word I didn’t like (cuase at least it wasn’t cussing).

Hope this review brightens your day. God bless.


Data Seeker

Dear Lemons and wraith oh my

This is also a good chapter.

The follow scenes are very cute, funny and well written. Larrin is annoyed with her condition; John is annoyed and baffled, and Rodney doesn’t want to be blamed for the new mishap (sam is a kid).

The discussion among the characters about Sam and Larrin’s condition was full of depth and detail. I like the split-personality; sometimes Larrin (and whoever gets zapped) will be an innocent child, and sometimes be an adult trapped in a child’s body.

I like the scene with Sam, Larrin (who are currently a child minded) with Jennifer; they were so sweet and Jennifer is trying to babysit them and is nice, though a bit baffled by the whole ordeal.

The following scenes have good interactions among the characters.

The wholesome standards are good (but you already knew that).


I hope this review brightens your day. God bless.


Data Seeker

Dear Lemon and wraith oh my

This is another good chapter. The quality is good.

The following scenarios are cute, funny and a touch of suspense.

Larrin is in the infirmary, they discuss the strange thing that happened.

The scene with Rodney, Radik, John and Ronon was funny; they were so in character.

The scene with Jennifer and Larrin was funny, Larrin is somewhat hyper and Jennifer is a little unbalance with dealing with little girl.

The following scenes with John and Larrin are very amusing; and it was great that Larrin got her memories back (I prefer deaged people having their memories). It was funny that Larrin (trapped in the body of a child) is so in character (sarcastic and irritable) and John is baffled and annoyed with Larrin.

Nice little cliffhanger.

The wholesome standards are high. There is nothing offensive.


I hope this review brightens your day.


Data Seeker

Dear Lemon and wraith oh my

This is another good chapter. The quality is good.

The following scenarios are cute and funny. Larrin (who has no memory of her adult life and kept in the dark) is hesitate, curious, and stubborn.

And the whole Aunt/Uncle deal is cute and slightly funny.

Ronon telling Larrin a story was cute (and handled in a believable way) and that was great when he gives the look.

Oh my, Larrin eats candy. That can be bad, then BOOM- something happens and she is in pain as images flash through her mind, and says something before passing out.

The wholesome standards are high. Nothing is offensive.

I hope this review brightens you're day. God bless.


Data Seeker

Dear Lemons and wraith oh my

Thanks for my request. I’ll leave a review for each chapter.

The Quality is good; good humor, emotion, touch of suspense, cuteness, narration, dialog, interactions and reactions.

The story plot is amusing, funny and adorable, the way things are introduces and the plot unfolds.

I like the various characters: Sam, Teyla, Ronan, John and Rodney are in character. And I like the portrayal of little Larrin. She is cute and innocent, but has a shadow of her adult self (strong, alert and stubborn). The Traveler captain who brought Larrin to Atlantis was well written too.

And you did great, describing their thoughts, emotions and their interactions was genuine. It was almost like watching an actual Atlantis episode.


The wholesome standards are high.

The language is clean.
Nothing is suggestively offensive.
No extreme violence or any other vile content.

I hope this review brightens your day. God bless.


Data Seeker

Poor Lorne. This was a great story. Very cute!

hehe, cute aftermath :D

yay, it worked! and Teyla certainly had a good idea with the cookie dough.
I liked the reference to Keller's sparring lessons with Ronon. And it's good to see Larrin being a bit more accepting at the end.
minor minor typo: "I felt that way for some time after I left me people" - should be my.

Great prank! Very cute. I'm sure Sam knows it was John and not Lorne's idea.