Liking it.

Being honest, the writing isn't more than average, but I really like this fic for the content.

Lol

Very funny PollyMal-ness.

Ok, I've got to say that even though I have an illogical hate for femslash (it is illogical, look at my fp account, I write the stuff) I really like this.

" other benefits as yet untested "

Brilliant.

Congratulations, you're my 3rd review today. I don't think I've done 3 reviews in the whole rest of my life...

Indy X

and yay! British person! (english british?)

While the Distress is perhaps not over-obvious in the situation mentioned, the Desires part turns out to be extremely satisfactory.

Nice way to talk about the Ruperts as if they were pets of the more harmless, if boring, sort. But - aren't the wo of them Ruperts as well - at least here?

The wide range of your writings is certainly amazing, to say nothing of the exquisite grammar and spelling, which are rare commodities at ffnet these days.