Great one-shot! I look forward to the story. Thanks

oh i cannot wait to read the full story! great o/s

loved it! :D

Really liked the chapter. Sounded like a college party to me. Though we had a few in the woods by the river. Most of us smoked and not necessarily cigarettes. It was also 40 years ago. People smoke. It's part of life. There wasn't a lot of sex going on, at least not out in the woods.

This was recommended to me by a friend and I loved it! Going to read the sequel now. :)

yep...that was awesome...I'm so glad you made it into a story...off to read "Good Bella, Bad Bella" right now! :-)

That was so HOT! Cold shower time :)

tutu smoking lol tisk tisk nah jj gr8 story XD

I love when Edwards bad

That was incredibly sexy. Every girl should get to enjoy a hot, steamy, sex-filled interlude with an amazingly hot guy. I got mine years ago, it was amazing...just a shame it wasn't with this 'Edward' because I have a feeling he is probably not as big a jerk as my interlude guy was, lol.

Could you please make this into a story is so good and I love stories about Edward & Bella doing it in different places. I hope to read some more soon

OMFG, I'm fanning myself, it were INCREADABLY HOT. Wow, can't wait to read the story. All I can say i !

Those people who say smoking is bad clearly have never seen a pic of Rob Pattinson smoking, something that looks that sexy surly can't be bad!

ok this was super hot! I can't wait to read the story!

Hi..!

i am esmeralda. i am mexican and i love you story White Carpet and Wall Sconces and Good Bella, Bad Bella. The story is funny and i would like to translate a think?