this story is VERY qood and VERY intreqinq[: .
Please continue i would LOVE to see how it ends[:

aw...
so sweet...
and very cute...
and very charming...

this was really good! thanks a lot for updating :3

Yipee. i'm so happy to read your update. hope the next chapter will come out soon. thanks.

this has definitely made my day :)
thanks so much!!

xoxo

please please please uopdate it is absolutley awesome! :)

I LOVE IT!
I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON!
it was something like a breather...
it's very new and very fun to read...
it's not at all dramatic...
so please update soon!

i love this story! i think you got soujiro and yuki's personality very well... cant wait for the update! ^^

Loved the story...

Any chance of you coming back with a chapter 9? Your work has been missed.

ohh please update!! i love this story i love the plot but honestly i wuld love to see yuki and sourijo come together nore quickly and have their relationship be the centre of the story! but great work plz update soon!!

Very original and unique.
Please update soon!

hello!
ur stories r really nice!!
pls update soon and thank you!
^^

Okay, this is an interesting story, but despite the writer's block plan wise I suggest you come up with your own ideas. That way the story stays yours and doesn't become a collaboration of many different ideas. Though I'm glad you officially have a plan for this story I truly believe you should use that plan, and create the smaller points yourself. Think of them as the plot points leading up to the ending. That way you never stray too far from the direction the story is going. If you ask other people to do it for you than all this fan fiction will become is an 'audience pleaser' meaning the story won't have any set structure and will just reflect the many ideas of your readers, and sure it will end the way they want it to, but then the story isn't yours anymore it's theirs.

Other than that, great fanfiction! I await the next chapter. This by far one of my favorite pairings in Hana Yori Dango (I find myself torn between TsukushixTsukasa anda TsukushixRui so this is really the only pairing I like enough to not to be wishy washy). I love your style of writing, it has that imagery that can be tiresome to most writers. You don't just paint a picture, you create a movie (at least to me). You also keep very close to the characters, especially Yuki. In the manga I've never seen her as the sweet, innocent girl only so I'm glad you went with that side of her.

-カイリirl

This story is getting more and more interesting!! Really geared up to read the next chapter!! Hope you will update soon k!! =D

oh hey! no wonder i found your pen name familiar! i've been waiting ages for you to update "the siege"! it's really hard for me to read it chapter by chapter coz i tend to forget what was in the previous chapter...sorry! but i really like how it's progressing and i'll continue reading it...i hope you don't mind terribly if i read it perhaps after you've completed it. good luck with this one too! :)