lol, that was hilarious

hahaha! that was hilarious! i burst out laughing when the silver surfer came in! nice job! oh and ARE you going to do a harry potter one? that would be great!

A great story. Very funny.

You never told us what you did to get sent to jail? thats sort of a plot chasm right there. lol.

Jack Sparrow's dialogue saved this. The beginning was a little random (which I can't say I think is good in fiction even if it illustrates how real life is) and it only truly (mostly) redeemed itself when "you" were so certain about having fallen into fanfiction, as if it happens every day (which, well, I guess on this website it probably does). Then I got to "Why, yes Mr. Sparrow, I just stumbled onto your secret island by pure accident. So sorry, aye, I am so very sorry…”" and LOLed from there. You got his wierd way of talking perfectly.

"“Crossover!” I said. “What’re you doing here?”" Lulz. Shameless, but funny.

Great job. I really enjoyed it. Yay Silver Surfer!

That was funny! Love your writing!

That was weird..I like it. Make more!

was there a point to this?

I love it! I'm a totally random and crazy person so I can really relate to this! One time me and my friend were body surfing in the ocean and we just kept yelling, "GREAT FREEDOM FRIES OF ROOTBEER BOTTLES, THAT'S COLD!" *smiles crazily*