I love your Charmain/Peter stuff! :) Good job!

This story is cute. I like how it's written as if it's a chapter in the book. It was funny how when they fell, he held her and how previously he didn't like her touching him. :D I just finished reading 'House of Many ways.' I didn't know she was making a forth book. Anyways, I think it is pretty silly to keep leaving the book to gather ingredients. No wonder it likes to switch pages!

Cute story. All of them were completely in character. Good work.