Damn you write very well ;)

wow. deep

... -notices that "next" button- Oh. There was more.

Not enough though. Want more. Want the aftermath. ;-;

E... *swoons happily* So good...

Two perspectives, two versions, two people angsting.

Utterly brilliant.

Wish there was more.

This is so amazing. It's beautiful, sad, and perfectly worded.

Wow, yet again, another cool chapter. Though... I gotta say, imagining Cid OR Vincent cryin' is pretty tough. Oh well, it fit's into this fanfic, so I think s' still cool. _

...

Wow.

I really like this story! And I love the fact that it's really long, and this is only the first chapter. I think you got a lot of Vincent's emotions explained, or at least how you think he feels about certain aspects and... wow. It was (and is) really, REALLY good.

oh my freakin god! could that have been any more dramatic?jesus christ! i gotta go watch something happy now...god. but i do want to know what happens next so, please finish the story!.

wow. this is breathtaking... but.. umm.. is it 'dead'?

Agh! This was so GOOD! But I'd expect noting less from you Zarla. God your so good at catching the characters personalities. I love how at first Vin seems to be having the problems, then it slowly goes over to Cid. This chapter was so sad! BUT I DIDN'T CRY! That much anyway...*sniff* Keep up the good work Zarla-san, and please update soon!

Oh the agony...*sniff* so sad, but you must let the show go on...WRITE MORE PLEASE!

*dries her tears*

Vinny... poor, poor Vinny... I love this pairing, and this is one of the best Vin/Cid fics I've ever read!

Wow... this... was utterly heartbreaking. *Cries* Beautiful, but heartbreaking.

...makes me want to kill someone on Cid's behalf. _ Am I sick?

Anyway... wow... Is there more to this fic, or is it done? Keep it going! (email me?)

This... yeah. I'm stunned by it. Love it. Breaks my heart, but I love it. (agnst monkey .

...Wow, how the hell did you write that, it was done so well. I am glad Vin was able to wake him up, it would have been horrid if he haddnt.

Are you going to update soo? I really hop so! This is a reall good fic and i hope to see more very soon.

Lora-helen.

Lol, i liked the ending, "Get bent Strief" But once again that was a very deep chapter, this is a really well written fic

Lora-Helen