Ugh you need to update!
I wasn't really into the story at first but as the chapters went on I started to like it. Please updat soon.

Love Natsuki Lee

I'm sorry right, I like your story and that... but Naruto spawning a pink-haired child with Sakura? *Shudder* No offence :P I'm just not Sakura's biggest fan... heh *States obvious*
Sai's a good guy though ^^ ahh

Very good chapter - though short, it read very smoothly XD. I know you were conflicted on which way to go with this and think you made the right choice. Naruto's interaction with Sai was nicely done - awkward, a bit bittersweet but not sentimental.

Looking forward to the next chapter[s].

Err, I think you made a mistake and posted Chapter 6 all over again :S

So it was Sai all along? eek

Does Sasuke then make an appearance or is this chap a misprint?

Wow! Short, but man was that suspicious! You're a queen with cliff hangers, I hope you realize that xD I can't wait for chapter 8 =) As for your conflict, I'm going to be selfish and say pick the one that will lead to a longer story xD I just don't want it to end, you're doing such an amazing job with it. There's just one thing I'm not sure I understand... at the end of Chapter six, it ended with "Sasuke, you lied to me." But at the beginning of this Chapter, I don't see what Sasuke could have lied about? Was it just an afterthought of a dream? Or am I just being impatient xD ? Ah, I'm sure I'll find out soon =) Good luck with your decisions =D !

This was a very well written chapter =) ! I actually liked the way you broke the scene between Naruto and Sasuke in the middle; maybe it's just me, but I think a full out smut scene would have thrown off all the intensity and earnestness that came with their reunion. With Sakura and Hinata, that was just brilliant. Akira spilled the beans xD I'm very anxious to see Sakura's reaction (other than the abuse of vegetables, heh!) And you won't believe how much I loved Sasuke and Naruto's conversation near the end. It added alot of depth to the story and it was wonderful =) How many times can I say I'm in love with this story before you get annoyed xD ?

Comparing love to colors...I adored that =D Hmm...so, I'm guessing that Mai is Hinata and Naruto's child xD ? I loved this chap, how the surroundings were so nostalgic and how Naruto was taking a little trip down memory lane =) I'm also loving the witty banter between Sasuke and Naruto; you're hitting the nail right on the head with that. Their meeting was really mind-blowing xD Heh heh, it seems Sasuke it still the cocky bastard, even after all these years, (well, of course). And Naruto finally admitted his love =D Quite interested to where this is heading...but, I can't help to think things are going to get bumpy soon. I'm loving everything so far =D Keep up the great work!

I'm really loving Konohamaru's team, and I love how they remind us of the old Team 7. Wow, Akira seems like a charmer xD But you put a real interesting story behind him! I haven't read an author/authoress who had the guts to make him the child of an UNMARRIED Sakura and Naruto! Kudos for originality and cleverness once again =D And I'm interested in the half sister...or is that Mai? Ah, well I bet I'll find out soon enough =) It's was kind of sad to see how Sakura and Naruto interacted... they seem pretty distant now. And Sai left? I wonder where... Great chapter, and great story so far =D !

It's like Naruto never even considered the thought that he loved Sasuke xD ! Hmm...maybe someone should mention that to him in the manga...Anyways, this was such a lovely chapter =) The dam instantly broke as soon as Sasuke left...it reminds me of that time of the Reunion between them...Naruto running to catch Sasuke at Oro's hideout and breaking down after he left. It was very realistic, is what I'm saying =) That message Sasuke left Naruto keeps me in suspense while at the same time, I became interested in the little boy Akira...but I have a couple of guesses of who he is x) This is going great, keep up the fantastic work =D

Wow...this was a really intense chapter. Well, of course, Sasuke's entering and nothing can ever be easy with him right xD ? I love how Naruto was strong throughout the whole ordeal... He's done a lot for Sasuke, but it wouldn't be like him to run up and hug him xD Even though, it was quite emotional =) And the ending...woo. Awesome, I'm loving it ^^ !

Wonderful introduction =D ! When the head band was mentioned, I instantly thought to... you know xD ! Most stories don't pay attention to something like that =) Very original, and clever way to start a chapter =) Loving it =)

Ok,so this is interesting. So far is good, although I would like longer chapters...I know Sasuke is up to something (crazy bastard xD). And about the chapters, I don't know, you're the author, so it's your decision. Also, is good to take advice of others, but remember this is YOUR story, it's important you always keep in mind where you wanna go or what you want to do with it (I hope I did make sense here...^^)Till next chapter!

Oh man a prick to the arm? Let's hope Sasuke isn't planning to shanghai Naruto away! And yes...if possible smut would be appreciated in later chapters :)

Your writing style is amazing and I love the suspense surrounding the story. But Naruto sounds all old and depressed :( I thought he would be a fun hokage! :P and a good dad...
Mrngh, I hope Sasuke admits he loves Naruto too ^^ Gimme chapter 8 :D