maybe ali's relationship with mike,experiences with mothering,
Pregnancy etc.

I would be curious to know what happens right after this. like did they talk about anything on their way back, what conversation took place with the Queen, etc. I think that'd be neat. =)

Poor Jordan! Being a normal human is such a disadvantage!!

haha loser John... poor Callie - but more importantly, poor Ali!! at least she has Jordan at the orphanage... for now.

Jordan is pathetic. Ali should have left her...

Jordan seems to get in the way alot. It's a good thing she dies.
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I think it would have been interesting if Ali acted as if she didn't do it, but when Callie was convinced that she did it, then she had to kill her. Jordan shouldn't be surprised either.

This is interesting.

noo what happens next

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aw...*sniffs* the girl just need some love. but those people seem to be wanting to make the worst monster out of her...

Even though I read it before it was posted, I still get excited reading it again on the website! Makes it seem so...awesome! ...I'm curious to see how you set up all the stories together in this one section!

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